hehe yeah. that's pretty much what went through my head... ;P
the thing abt haikus is, as far as i understand la, the last line mmg punchline dia should be powerful to the mind/senses. so yeah, i'm glad ou like this one. i'm particularly fond of this one too, tbh. :)
for some reason i'm really enjoying haikus. it 'flows' better with malay (due to the syllabic-ness of the 2 languages), but usually the english versions are less nature-related (or more like, more flexible) so they're fun to do.
you should check this out, agak sempoi but very amusing: http://www.oocities.com/haikumelayu/bangau.html
for some reason i really liked this one. i think it's the last line that really got me.
ReplyDeletehehe yeah. that's pretty much what went through my head... ;P
ReplyDeletethe thing abt haikus is, as far as i understand la, the last line mmg punchline dia should be powerful to the mind/senses. so yeah, i'm glad ou like this one. i'm particularly fond of this one too, tbh. :)
for some reason i'm really enjoying haikus. it 'flows' better with malay (due to the syllabic-ness of the 2 languages), but usually the english versions are less nature-related (or more like, more flexible) so they're fun to do.
you should check this out, agak sempoi but very amusing:
http://www.oocities.com/haikumelayu/bangau.html